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lou040901
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Another Crappy Song

Postby lou040901 » Thu Apr 13, 2017 11:59 pm

I try, I try so hard,
But there's still a hole in my heart,

I just want to be free,
From the Demond's in me,
I just want to break free,
I just want to go back, to being me
The way I used to be,
But now I see
happiness is only imaginary.

This was just the chorus to another song I am making just feel like shit and I hate it. I hate myself and I hate everything I feel like I'm dying

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Re: Another Crappy Song

Postby count-brakula » Fri Apr 14, 2017 2:05 pm

Hi again Lou,
I'm sorry to hear that you're hurting so badly at the moment, and hope that it eases up soon.
I'm gonna have reiterate again that your songs are not remotely crappy. You've given your pain a voice, a voice that needs to be acknowledged. Others going through similar suffering can identify with them and in turn feel a little less alone in their own pain.

I hope you start feeling better soon and take care,
Mike.

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Re: Another Crappy Song

Postby lou040901 » Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:19 pm

Thank you Mike it's nice to think my lyrics are good


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